Yes, very tricky. I'm definitely on the side of the hunters. When I first read the hunter's agreement, I first thought you were writing it from the position of the landowner, not the hunter. I thought you were a landowner and were willing to share your land with hunters. Obviously, this was the opposite, so, I went back and put a disclaimer in my post. You definitely do not want to put too many things in a contract you are pitching to a landowner, especially if they limit your rights and enjoyment at all.
As a hunter, I think your agreement is good. It shows consideration, care, respect, and responsibility. It will certainly increase success at gaining hunting position. From the landowner's side--which I admit I was wrong to think that was the angle you were first coming from--you definitely want a water tight agreement. One of my good buddies leases (that's right, leases) hunting land for hunting deer during both bow and powder burning seasons. The lease he signs is seriously about 6 pages long--much like an apartment lease. It stipulates everything from where he can park, the hours he can hunt, blah, blah, blah, he basically has no rights if he gets hurt or dies....blah!!
So, it's a double edged sword. Many of us airgunners own land and are willing to share it with other hunters, so we have to protect our property and rights. However, many of us airgunners are looking for land to hunt on. I'm under the belief that most hunters out there are very respectful, caring, and responsible stewards of the land. However, a gentleman's handshake doesn't hold much water in court these days. With frivolous lawsuits popping up all over the place for the dumbest reasons, it's good to protect yourself.
I was also thinking a little bit--perhaps inspired by my first misinterpretation of this thread----- Say, you approach a landowner with your hunter's agreement form. He/she might look over it and then decide (like I did) that there needs to be more clauses in the contract protecting him/him. Would it be better to not even give the idea to a willing landowner about such a contract when he/she might just let you hunt there anyway?
I'm not sure.
It's an interesting conversation. I don't know the answer. But I'm coming from the angle of wanting my cake and eating it, too. I want to be gain permission from willing landowners to hunt without many stings attached, but if I owned land I would want an ironclad contract protecting me from having my arse sued off in court for something that the hunter did or something that happened to the hunter.
I think in the end, if you're aware of both sides of the situation, you'll have much success in getting permission to hunt in lots of places. You want to show respect to the landowner, but you also don't want to put too many ideas in the landowner's head about setting up a contract to hunt. For instance, if a hunter presented me a contract to hunt on my land, I'd probably be inclined to put a few of my own clauses in there since the hunter was already in the mood to have a contract in the first place.